Monday, April 30, 2012

Common mistakes


Common errors list

Usage of un-necessary commas: I really don’t like that scarf, although, it looks rather nice, on you.

Not knowing when to use a semi-colon or comma: I’m quite glad that it was so tough; I believe it has prepared me for next year and has set helpful guidelines for me that I wont forget.

Run-on sentences: When I saw the thing hovering in the air, it looked rather frightening, I soon realized it was an alien spacecraft, I was afraid that I may get abducted or what not.

Issues with quoting: Then Reginald said “, I don’t think that’s the right thing to do at all”.

Switching between tenses: Talking about something that already happened “That was a horrid thing really, but it isn’t that bad I suppose. Maybe it will be.”

Repetition of words: It is rather nice that you got that good grade, but my grade was rather bad. I hope I get a rather good grade on the next assignment.

Yearly Reflection


Austin Howard
Dr. deGravelles
Block 2
4/30/12
Yearly English Reflection
This year in English I think that I have come a long way in the way I write and have a better understanding of the overall writing process. Even though I do still need improvements in some areas of writing, I feel that I have improved greatly from the first semester. In some areas I don’t believe I need much help at all while other areas of writing, I need to do better.
After looking at all of the comments and editions that were made on my papers, I realized a couple of things that I seemed to have trouble on throughout the year that were consecutive through out my papers. One of the largest issues that I had on seemingly all of my papers was simply actually focusing on what is supposed to be written. I seemed to go off on tangents or start talking about something else and go into detail about it when I was supposed to be focused on something else, or sometimes just missing the entire topic all together. I seemed to get a bit better with that every essay I wrote but I have always seemed to struggle with this issue and I still struggle with it. I hope to improve with this issue in the next year or so, or maybe even erase the mistake all together.
I also struggled quite a lot with the MLA format and citing in my papers. I don’t think that I fully understood how to put my paper into the correct format, or properly cite certain quotations and give credit to the author. I would get confused about the authors name, and where to properly place the first or last name, or just last when applicable. Now that I have written many papers this year though, many that I have had to cite names, I believe I have gotten better with the process and can now cite authors properly.
One of my greatest strengths, while writing, is my use of word choice. I believe I have improved much on this. After scanning over my papers thoroughly, my choice of words never seemed to be an issue. When writing, I always try to avoid repeating the same words too often, and to use a wider variety of words in my work. I’ve found that this use to be an issue at a younger age, and somewhat at the beginning of this year. Once I grew older and my vocabulary expanded, I strove to use more advanced words. At first, it was a challenge to do so, although as I used more developed words in my writing, I also used them in everyday talk. Using these words regularly seemed to help me to understand the words and even encourage me to use them more in writing.
After contemplating over the responses I received on my papers, I now understand what I did that was incorrect. I have definitely learned from these mistakes and I’m sure that this will help me not to make the same errors in the future. While writing, I now find it easier to find mistakes that I would have previously over looked.
For the years to come, I imagine that my writing will get better, and I hope it does. My plan to improve my writing is maybe to write some over the summer. About random stuff, just to make sure I don’t get rusty. I think this will help me for next year because at the beginning of school years, I usually have trouble getting back into writing.
This years English class seemed rather brutal at some times, but now that I look back on it, I’m sure it will pay off and it definitely has helped me, quite a lot. I’m quite glad that it was so tough; I believe it has prepared me for next year and has set helpful guidelines for me that I wont forget. 

Monday, April 16, 2012

"Across the Universe" The Beatles

The first line of these lyrics, I notice that there is a simile. Also in this first stanza there is personification. 
"Words are flowing out like endless rain into a paper cup
They slither wildly as they slip away across the universe
Pools of sorrow, waves of joy are drifting through my open mind
Possessing and caressing me" This is showing personification because waves can't be joyful , nor can pools be sorrowful. Neither can waves possess or caress someone or something. 


Something else I saw when reading these lyrics is that there seems to be some imagery involved. As a matter of fact, I believe this whole stanza is using imagery. 
"Images of broken light which dance before me like a million eyes
They call me on and on across the universe
Thoughts meander like a restless wind inside a letter box
They tumble blindly as they make their way across the universe" I believe this is imagery and I do indeed get a sort of picture in my mind when i read, or hear this stanza. 



Link to lyrics: http://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/beatles/acrosstheuniverse.html

More Desperation.

I kept reading Desperation this week. The story went back to the original family I read about. The cop that had captured them locked them up, upstairs in some cells. The woman got loose and grabbed a shotgun and nearly killed the cop. She missed, I assume because she was in a hurry and was very frightened. He then pushes a desk into her, nearly killing her. He seemed angry at first then was nice to her. She asked him not to kill her and he acted like he would never attempt to hurt her. Is this guy crazy?

Im thinking that maybe something is going on because while this is happening, the other guy that was taken by the other cop, I now remember that it was the same description as the other cop. Could they be androids or something? I'm really not sure but I'm eager to find out. The other man talks about his previous life, before he was taken by the cop.

1hr. 20min. on Friday
1hr. on Saturday
15min. on Sunday

Monday, April 2, 2012

"My Papa's Waltz."

When reading this poem I focused my attention to imagery and also to sound. I noticed that it has a sort of classic rhyme scheme to it, where the end of the lines, on every other line, the words rhyme. The rhymes aren't always exact rhymes while some of the words just slightly rhyme with one another such as dizzy and easy. I also noticed how each section of the poem is like a different scene, at least thats how I imagined it. Each part of the poem is just one sentence each.
 I understand how the title of the poem relates to the poem itself. It essentially sounds like it is explaining a scenario, where a young boy is "waltzing" with his father. The father is drunk and this reflects as they go about the kitchen knocking over pots and such. The mother in the family seems to be disappointed maybe at the father, not just for knocking over the pans but maybe also the fact that he is drunk and playing with their child.
One other thing I noticed that may be nothing at all is that it seems to have a hint of violence. For on thing, the drunk man. Then the author uses phrases and words such as, "hung on like death" "the hand that held my wrist was battered at one knuckle" and "you beat time on my head." Maybe this is something subtle that the author added, to show that the father may be abusive.

Sunday, April 1, 2012

Desperation part 4.

Instead of continuing with the story form the first family I read about,  the author describes a different person. It seems to me as if the author is maybe rounding people up in a way, showing different scenarios of people. I assume that they are all around the same time though. I don't know what the big cop is going to do with everyone though, he also takes this new character to the police station as well.

I'm wondering if there may be multiple cops because since all of these people being taken, it makes sense that multiple cops are involved. I don't know what going to happen to these people, and I am also curious as to if there will be more people joining the current group I have read about.

Reading time:

1hr. on Saturday
1hr. 45 min. on Sunday